Very cute! Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Ah, lovely fic. I just finished the game yesterday and the first thing I did today was try to find the fanfiction... how sad is that? Anyway, I love this little piece and my search says you have another longer one AND I AM SO EXCITED TO READ IT.

That was beautiful, I needed a better ending than the game gave me. I wanted them to confess how they felt about each other. So thank you for letting me enjoy this! ;)

awesome story

It was beautiful :)

Well this was a rather unique game and so underrated. Nice addition to the story, I think these two ship rather well together. :)

It was a nice easy read and I see no outstanding issues in the writing... good job. Although these little known games only have a small following its nice to see other people writing fan fics about them.

So sweet!
You did an amazing job!

Beautifully written. I really liked it. You should write more! I would have been completely happy if the game ended like this. :D

That was awesome, maybe u broke the 'show . Dont tell' rule now and then. Please write moreeee! Theres no sequel to the game apparently :(

... you better continue this, this is awesome... *O*

This is fantastic! I really wish there was more Enslaved Fanfiction. It's such an awesome game:)