I laughed out loud at Shepard's sudden realization that everyone lusts after her, and the conversation with Garrus told their story beautifully without needing explanation, which is very hard to do. Nicely done!

Poor Shepard. Everyone is in love with you and it's so awkward. XD This is really good. Aethyta clearly doesn't understand aliens even half as well as she thinks she does.

Garrus Vakarian FTW, sorry Liara. And Traynor. And Kaidan. Not sorry Allers.

Love love love... That is all :)

Lol, this was pretty funny, Shepard suddenly realizing that she's been sending out mixed messages.
But how do you kiss a Turian? Their faces are all bony, that just can't work.

Very adorable! I can't help but love such fluffiness!

So cute. Loved the dialogue, loved the interaction between Shepard and Garrus (and between Shepard and her thoughts). I suppose you know by now that you have a knack for Garrus and Shepard, but it can't hurt to send one more ringing endorsement your way, can it? I think not. Great job!

d'awwww, how sweet. Garrus all embarrassed and flustered and thinking he's about to get dumped. It almost makes me feel sorry for Traynor (but not Kaidan because he's a douche). Maybe Shep should just *ahem* "introduce" Liara and Traynor.

Gold rating for this one! No actually, make that Platinum. (Ha ha) I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading this and from the amazing descriptions of Garrus' bodylanguage, I can almost see him fidgeting in front of me.

This short story killed me xD I burst out laughing at the moment when Shep cut Garrus off at: "Can it wait? I'm in the middle of some calibrations." Pure Gold. I do wish Shep had the option to say what she did to him, because that drove me insane in the games. Her line would have made the perfect renegade interruption.

Awesome job (:

This is the absolute best thing ever, and is making me smile like a smiling thing. I'm actually a little sad I didn't get that bug in my playthrough! 3

Haha I was laughing the whole way through this. Great story

Ohhh, I like this. Very cute-funny. I had the same moment with my Garrus girl but it was Kaidan not Liara's dad. I so thought I messed things up. And Mordin teasing about Eve...

Anyway, this kind of clears things up. Lol.

I'm not much w/ words, but I wanted to write a review to share w/ you how much I really enjoy your Shep / Garrus stories! I really hope you write more, you've become one of my favorite fanfiction authors! _ I can't imagine not reading any more of your stories... Thanks for sharing your writing here for fans like me! Just wanted to let you know people are reading & appreciating your words.

Bahaha. The way you highlight how every conversation needs to be second guessed...well, I'd never really thought about it before, but yes, EVEYRONE wants to get with Shepard! I love that you tied Shepard's reactions with the player's so seamlessly. I'm still chuckling. :D

I do love that being nice in the game is basically flirting, as you're only one dialogue choice away from romancing them at any given moment. lol that's why I never talked to Jacob; it always felt like she was trying to jump him when all I wanted to do was TALK.

Also "She liked the guy—always had—but (in the immortal words of teenagers everywhere) didn't like like him." sums up non-romanced Kaidan. I always though of him like a puppy that chewed on your favorite pair of shoes; he ticks you off something fierce, but, dang it, how can you kick that little guy?

Anyway, sweet story and I hope to see more soon .