Holy shit...They way you've written this book was mind-blowing and it's hard to believe that it's your first. I'm absolutely in love with your writing and can't wait to read more.

Loved the scene between Katniss and her mother, very nicely written. Love that Katniss has other acquaintances and is not limited to her relationship with Gale, very realistic.

Lovely chapter as per usual.

“ It suddenly seemed ridiculous to think that it wasn't inevitable that I'd wind up trusting him with my heart too.”

One of my favourite lines from this chapter. A relationship based on friendship, trust and mutual understanding is the kind I can get behind, of course it’s only inevitable.

Loved this chapter!

Great start to the fic, love that it’s already an established ship, it’s rare to see this. Love your take on Katniss so far and can’t wait to see this fic unfold.

This is my second time reading this after years, and I still think that it's even better than the original works. WOW. Just wow. I wish this was the real story because it's so much more enthralling. Amazingly well written, captivating... The characters are so well developed and the plot incredible. I love how strong Katniss and Gale are, a stark comparison to Katniss' roiling internal state in canon. I love that she's so much smarter and actually willing to change the world. Gale in this story is wonderful. Most authors can't capture him well at all, but you've done such a great job at fleshing out his character. Thank you so much for writing this story.

hey when are you going to update the sequel? or is it on permanent hiatus?

This has to be one of my favs where they’re both in the games! Idk if you ever finished writing it since I saw your post on LJ and didn’t see anything under your profile on AO3, by if you did please pm me because I’d love to read what you do have at the very least!

‘He chuckled ruefully’

CHOOSE BETTER WORDS.
*whistles 4 note tune*

OOC

Hi, I adore your history and I shall wish to read the continuation. However I cannot find the site where you posted her.
Can you pass on me the link?

Thank you in advance

This was a really creative and interesting alternative to the book, which I thoroughly enjoyed reading (:

I loved this so much I read the whole thing in one go! You are an incredible writer.

I like it but it seems you skipped over foxface. After the fight with cato and co. She just disappeared and didnt fight with katniss like at all.

Yay there’s a sequel. But is there another of Mockingjay

I’m in love with this. I enjoyed this more than the actual freaking book.