OMG you are evil to end it there. I can't wait to the read the sequel to this story!

seriously you can't stop there!

Here is One to get your 20. Can't wait for the sequel .

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!

Wow, a very emotional chapter as your last one. And yes, you are a meanie for ending on a cliffhanger. Not sure Gibbs and Jenny could survive their daughter's death, especially considering the circumstances. Nice that Kate wanted to help. I wish she could. So you finished your first story! Congratulations! Great job!

oooooooh! i loved Jenny giving birth to Marie and swearing about Gibbs and then thanking him once she was in her arms, so sweet. looking forward to the sequal

First of all I would like to say: Thank god Josaf is in jail! And second of all: ... What the heck is with leaving us hanging like this?! Are you trying to kill us with all these suspenseful moments and cliffs?! I swear if you don't upload the next story soon things aren't going to be pretty! Great story!

OMG! I hope Marie is going to be okay. I hope Kate is able to pull whatever strings she needs to, to send Marie back to Gibbs and Jenny. Looking forward to the sequel and seeing what kinds of twists and turns you have planned for that. Fantastic job on your first story!

*amanda*

thanks..loved it...hope marie doesn't die i would really cry

I knew it was her! I knew it was Kate! :D :D

You're mean! :P

I liked it can't wait to see what happens next

great update! i think it's either kate or kelly.

thanks...fabulous...

Kate!

This keeps on getting better and better! I hope the brunette is Kate and Marie could also see Kelly... At least they could get to know each other... :)