Reviews for Novice
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2019
Great!
Heather Snow chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
This was a very nice one-shot. I don't normally ready pieces under 1000 words, because the style just doesn't normally work for me. But, this was well done. Nice emotional contrast. Good characterization. And I love to see John get a chance to be the hero.
Ford.Ye.Fiji chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
Happy 100 favorites! YAY!
Wynsom chapter 1 . 2/17/2015
Yes! For me, the delight in these stories exists because you allow our beloved characters to delight in each other! I love how you contrast the weight of great worry and concern about John's ribs with the amusing levity of their relief.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
nice one shot
Violet Verner chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
Brilliant.
nimagine chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
This is lovely. Thanks for writing it, dearie! Great characterization. You don't have them all freaking out and begging for mercy on the other, just silently worrying and being generally awesome. Perfect.
xtin2000 chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
nnniiiiiiiceeeeeee :))))
jack63kids chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
' "O Captain, my Captain!" Sherlock couldn't stop grinning. "That was positively brilliant!" ' - Sherlock's right - yes it was! Not just that line, but the whole fic too.

Another fav line: 'Small brain, large gun, undisciplined, unpredictable – a novice criminal can be a dangerous thing.' Oh yeah! and... 'the man before them became unhinged as both his criminal career and arse were quickly becoming history.' ... but I'm stopping there, before I quote the whole fic.

Love a bit of BAMF John! Especially with some hurt/comfort thrown in for good measure.
Azile Signer chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
This ones too funny!
Rainie Skyes chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
Love it when John gets a chance to show his stuff! And in fairness, he did warn him... Brilliant!
TorchwoodPride chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
:-D
librarywitch chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Oh well done. This was short but sweet. We love our John don't we?
ButterscotchCandybatch chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
O Captain my Captain! I love BAMF!John - very nice!
DreamsOfPari chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
O Captain, My Captain! :D I NEED A BIGGER EMOTICON TO SHOW YOU MY GRIN! Lolol ;)

Xoxo
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