PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER
THIS IS AWESOME!

AHHHHHH. That is who is twas. Okay. Sounds good

I've read almost all your stories, In Ancient Times being my favorite, I have never really liked Gohan and Vegeta pairings but I really like this. Kinda hoping for a battle between father and son. Thank you!

Must read more! This is awesome :) I love, love, love how Goku is an asshat and Vegeta still loves him. Daww. Gohan- save your prince!

YES! YAAAAAY! I love that you're continuing this story! I was really excited that you put up another chapter. Lol I really thought that it was Piccolo in the last chapter too, I hoped that it was but Gohan is cool too. There really isn't enough P/V stuff out there. But I'm loving the Gh/V fic XD

Nice story - shocking endings to each chapter!

am I the first to review this chapter ? am I am I ? gosh, I'm so excited, forgive me ;)
WOW. I'm really starting to like Gohan here... I never pictured him to be this way. It's different, but oddly fitting. Thumbs up for a job well done !

Wow that was deep. I can't wait till you write more. :-)

This almost seems like it could turn into a gohan x vegeta fic

omg awesome story! couldnt believe it was gohan, i thought it was piccolo lol
please update! i really wanna know what happens!
thnkx for the awesome story

Poor geta. Stupid goku.

I really want to see where this story goes. Please add more

Please update.

How can goku be so heartless.

GOHAN? wha