That was amazing great job

This is wonderful! I'd love to see you write more in this fandom with these characters, I enjoyed this one so much! I loved the way you'd thought through how medical care for the young heroes would work. I think that you wrote Wally's POV here very well, and I loved protective Barry. I think that you did a great job of taking what is shown in the tv show of Barry and Wally and expanding it. I absolutely love the way you've written Barry, his gentle humor and how much he cares for Wally. The part at the end was very sweet, as well. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this, I really cannot say enough good things about it.

Best,

Susana

I love the cute babyish possessiveness Flash has for Kid Flash. You are excellent at worrying about their relationship. Please do more like these!

Nice reflections by Flash on the issue of sidekicks.

so beautiful! 3

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it was amazingly adorable i loved it

This was such a great story. I love the whole scene between Wally and his uncle, particularly the part where Wally hears the chuckle and then finally recognizes whose feeding him. And how embarrassed Wally was when Barry had to feed him. It was just the perfect mixture of hurt/comfort and the ending was so sweet.

Overall, adorable story and it makes me want to read more from you!

Very cute :)

Wow. This is a beautiful piece of work. I loved how you got into both Kid and Flash's heads. I REALLY liked it when Flash thinks of what he, Green Arrow, Aquaman, and Batman had all gained and given up when they took on their own proteges. And going into the press and all that stuff was excellent. It made the story flow and seem all the more real.
There were a few grammatical errors that I spotted, but nothing that was extremely hurtful in the end. I would suggest marking the separation when you switch point of views.
Again, AMAZING piece! *flies off to fave*

this story just had all kinds of warm fuzzies buzzing around in me :3 it was so family-cute!

Aww, I could almost swear that they're one of the most cutest mentor and protege pairs ever!
I love how you ended it as well.

Ohhhh I LOVE Barry and Wally's mentor/student uncle/nephew relationship! Its one of the reasons Barry and Wally are my fave Flash/Kid Flash team! You did this PERFECTLY!

Great story! So cute:-)

i loooooved this story. you portrayed the characters just right and the story flowed well. normally, when i read fics they have tons of spelling and grammar errors, my biggest pet pev, but not this piece. keep writing, i would love to see more of your work!