Nice. Intense. Liked it.

Wow! No other words needed, except thanks.

This story is not good at all

Liked it. Nice writing. So Caskett...

I love this Kate. Fiesty and authoratative. Castle has to face the music.

Haaawwwwt! Trinx was right. This was a great story! Two thumbs way up! :D

"...because you ARE my heart." Perfect.

Uh-oh... the bombshell is about to be dropped...

The eternal question: "your place or mine?" Love it!

ah communication... it's a beautiful thing!

Oooooooh... even better than I thought. Nice, Edite. Very nice!

Dear Pananana,

Incredible job on your first story. I loved how they communicated their love and all of the misunderstandings before they consummated their love. These two have a major communications problem and bad timing, and frequent interruptions! It was great how they had time to be honest with each other and with themselves. Thank you for a very enjoyable, and hot, bedtime story. I will be reading your other work - thanks again.

Loving the story so far. I am glad that she didn't wreck the car or hit anyone. My favorite line is about Castle walking toward the woman who had imprinted in his heart - what a beautiful word and so appropriate (imprinted). Thank you.

Good I Really Liked it

Very Very Nice

good story so far