I LOOOVE LOVE LOVE Inception, and this is definitely one of my favourite fics about them :3 I can never get enough of this pair xD Thank you so much for writing, I look forward to reading your other fics!

AW! He loved him!...X3 That was the perfect ending for the perfect fiction! I loved reading this! U should totally write some more! XD

Wow that was incredibly hot! My only comment is that you spelled the word thought as 'taught' which was distracting and easily fixed.

Bad writing?
This was flawless, always keep writing, it was great 3

Well the movie messed with mind but this story turned it to mush! (in a good way) XD Arthur was so sweet and Eames was just plain and simply awesome! I loved the opening especially...The description of the rain was touching! If you're thinking of continuing it i'm all in favour1 X3

I loved it. and it was very well written. you have talent!