There were 5 remaining survivors actually but only 4 commited suicide

Glad to see all the awesome Aliens references you threw in there. It's gotta be my favorite 1980's movie of all time.

I know this is a bit late but I'd love to see another. I have hoped I'd (informally) meet another F-series player. Just wish these "new" Fallout games would have some kind of co-op multiplayer function but yeah. Nice job though, keep it up.

Good stuff. I'd appreciate more tales from you in the NV universe. I wonder what grade you got for this, and what the teacher said. Vault 22 would be a great story, the green mutants jumping out after silently combing the halls would be a great scare tactic. Anyway, good work, keep it up.

VERY Nice detail and story structure. For being like me- not knowing much about the FNV universe, you convinced me you knew a lot. I love the conversations in your story- they made me feel like I was playing the game. :)

Amazing job :)

I agree with what The Japanese Wonder has said in his comment, It is really well written, and definitely stands out as one of the better stories that are built off of a single quest. I'd just like to say, though, that the line breaks make the scene changes a little jarring, although they are handled well. If you want to do authors notes, like you did in this one, I'd recommend either italicizing or bolding them, just so they stand out as something other than the main body of the story. It could get a little confusing if you do. Also, when you publish more often on the site, it'd be a good idea to make one story and have separate chapters for each place you visit, It'll make it a little easier to manage all of them.

I... I... I can not form the words expressing my extreme praise for this excellently written piece of literature. Honest to fucking GOD, this is some fan-Fucking-tastic work and I would not be surprised if you got an A on it. I actually am so surprised at the skill required to write this well and am even more surprised and astounded that you have it! I am being 100% serious about this. I am saying please, nay, begging, and I never beg, that you right more. Plus, I felt quite uneasy about the men being named "Modesto" and "Winter" because the first is my principal's last name in South Deerfield, Massachusetts, and the other is my friend. In short: THIS IS MOTHAFUCKING SWEET!.

Actually, the fifth was trying to talk the others out of suicide, then sighs after the fact and leaves. Lastly, I would totally be on board with the whole Vault 22 scenario. Please write it!

Nice story. You wrote this for your teacher?

...Interesting to say the least...

Fairly well written, although admittedly slightly awkward flow-wise (but only slightly). Some of the transitions into dialogue, as well as the dialogue itself, can be fixed. It's believable banter about 96% of the time, but a few flaws are present. Most of it is coherently written, and it's much more engaging than most of the "Follow the tale of the Courier" type stories on this site. Some description of the Courier's expressions could be useful as well, especially to denote changes in atmosphere or mood. If I was to make one strong complaint, however, it would be the action sequence. That part wasn't as much fun as I'd hoped. Still, otherwise it was well written. I look forward to your next work.

simple thank you for this story i lov it