Well poo. Was hoping this was like a, years into the future epilogue chapter. lol. Welp. I have read all of the stories you have completed. I really enjoyed this one. I love horror stuff, as long as my faves don’t die. Lol. I enjoyed the aspect of Charlie being a part of her life and stuff too, thinking about him in a role like this is actually rather neat. I really hope someday you come back and finish your incomplete stories so I can read them.

I read some comments before I got into this and noticed someone mentioned the three and that there were five but I think they got confused. I did for a second there too, until I realized that it wasn’t the La Push deaths they were talking about but clearly a trio murdered on campus where Bella and Angela are (clearly their full moon kills).

Kinda glad Angela won’t be on the menu but that’s a lot of wolves and rather small number of victims. Lol. The twist of them being true were and not shifters is fun.

Oh man, I sense we’re about to get a treat here. Seems Paul imprinted on Bella there at the end and is now going to claim his mate. But what’s with them scaring the shit out of everyone and then showing up as if they’re there to party?

Three torn apart by wolves? Tyler, Mike, Conner, Jessica, and Lauren. That’s five.

The beginning of this story is all ‘classic high school party with a little wolf’ but I have a feeling it’s about to get real Red Riding Hood in here

this was actually a really interesting take! I love how you wrote this and I'd love to read more if you're able because it would be interesting to see what else you would put the lack through.
amazing read keep it up!

I don't usually like. Stories like this but i do like it wierd huh thanks for writing it

Definitely a creative twist! Very good, thank you!

oh no I hope that they don't hurt their high school friends right. Because how are the two girls going to explain why they are alive and not the rest.

oh wow I wonder what happened there with Paul for him to act the way he did towards Bella. Interesting first chapter.

That's great good luck... This is a great story good job...

Whoa that was I tense and unexpected even though Tyler sensed the Change but there was nothing that could be done... That was a good chapter...

Things are about to change...

Wow they should nt watched that movie it like they are living it now I hope they survive...