I absolutely loved this story. It was bittersweet.

WTH is this

Ajknsjndsdnasjfnxsfsd! That was soo beautiful! Great job, Misty! XD

Nice story.

Hope you'll write more.

Hey!

I was checking out the mergana archive and I saw your fic. Your plot has great potential but you don't seem to want to develop it. Or maybe you have done so in a two-shots and you mistakenly uploaded the wrong file making the 2nd chapter a repeat of the 1st?

But, for example, you could stop at the "today is going to be the day" bit and describe the context a little bit more. Or maybe you could make it a prologue and recount their previous life/lives before reaching the prologue scene and developing on their meeting in the store, their talk and even their deserved happy ending. With, of course, the intervention of their 1st lives' friends to add some twist.

I am just saying because your plot really has a great potential to make for a marvelous story.

Anyway, I hope you will develop it more.

Yours,

Eliza

Ooooh! This is really good, Mitt! So happy you decided to get a FF account! :D

I hope I can change destiny. I love the couple who made Merlin and Morgana.