| Reviews for Rigentum |
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Guest chapter 4 . 6/11/2013 Lindsey! thats my name! :D exept with a a not a e |
Guest chapter 16 . 6/9/2013 ooh ominous. thank you for the chapter |
Silver chapter 16 . 6/9/2013 By far, the most epic story i've ever read in the adventure time fandom. |
Maguffium239 chapter 3 . 6/8/2013 Ok. I like the two kids; they're decent characters. But I know a couple marines and they don't act like Captain Bates at all. That said, this is overall a decent story. |
vhdc1234 chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 Hold on Hold on. If this starts from the episode 'incendiem' then that mean FP is still in her lantern doesn't it? |
The Awes0me 0ne chapter 15 . 4/15/2013 That... Was... AWESOME... Great job! It was almost worth the wait! Haha, I love this story and I'm glad you finnally updated it. I'm looking forward to reading what happens next! Although I saw one problem, when you have dialouge you should start a new paragraph every time a different person speaks. No one ever teaches you that, and the only reason I know it is because someone told me when I was doing that. |
Writer of Epics chapter 15 . 4/14/2013 the alien planet is earth, that'd a strange thought. nice chapter. |
Somebody chapter 3 . 4/2/2013 Marceline seems a little mature for her age in the flashback. otherwise, the chapter's alright |
Writer of Epics chapter 14 . 2/17/2013 I really like the story, you have nice spins on episodes with a valid plot. over all its a very good read. and I did look up earths second moon, if you mean Cruithne, it isn't a moon. It's actually a minor planet that orbits the sun in a very similar orbit to earth at relatively the same speed (give or take a couple million miles per hour) and sometimes comes close to earth. |
The Awes0me 0ne chapter 14 . 2/10/2013 Ooh history of a mysterious charachter.. Looking forward to it. Also, INTELLIGENT DINOSAURS. Well duh ya got raptors, and stuffs. Im hungry.. I wonder what a dinosaur would taste like? Kill a triceratops, get a chunk of meat, and cook it up. Ya know, I've never tasted a reptile before.. I mean birds yeah but ya know. Anyways good job! |
NefariousAquarius chapter 14 . 2/8/2013 loved it. can't wait to hear more about his back story. |
AlexanderTheAdventurer chapter 1 . 2/1/2013 AMAZING |
finnfan219 chapter 11 . 1/25/2013 Dont beg for reviews man. I love this series. Instead of reviewing i just move. To the next chapter. Sorry about that. Oh btw its Marine Corps. Keep on writing por favor! |
NefariousAquarius chapter 13 . 1/21/2013 oh i know what you mean some parts a the story are just sad to write but it's like the story has a mind of its own and it makes you write it. |
Mr.nin10do chapter 13 . 1/21/2013 Trade an ipod for hambo aww yyeaah |