AWW crap! Please please please please please please continue this! I think I'm your biggest fan! XD (I tend to fanboy a lot :P ). But seriously! I love what you are doing with your characters and I don't want it to stop!

AWW crap! Please please please please please please continue this! I think I'm your biggest fan! XD (I tend to fanboy a lot :P ). But seriously! I love what you are doing with your characters and I don't want it to stop!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSE UPDATE SOON!

I've never played any Kid Icarus but after your introduction of Pit you make me want to play one :P Also, watching let's play sounds like a good idea. I haven't played half the characters' games, so watching a lp would be a good thing to do. The chapter was great, I like the ”new” Link's personality. I'm eager to see what will happen to Lucario, too.

This first chapter was SO good. Your writing was flawless and they way you portrayed Lucario was excellent. I'm definitely going to read more.

PLEASE. WRITE. MORE!

You are amazing. Don't change anything. In case you want to PM me, look up the author name Zeldaandpikminforever. Yes, its a long name, and yes, I've heard it a million times.

Hey your back, yeah.
So, I like this chapter but, I hate cliff hangers.
I am already comping the bit every time a new chapter comes out.

Merry Christmas and Happy New Years!

YES! Thank you for updating! It's a really good chapter and everything seemed to flow really well.
Two things:
One: NO MORE CLIFFHANGERS! Please?
Two: Do Link and Lucario have some sort of bond? It seems that way.
Anyway, thanks again and Merry Christmas or whatever you celebrate!

You are really good at writing, I can't wait for the next chapter! Merry Christmas, Atra du evarìnya ono varda! (May the stars watch over you!)

I absolutely love this story! I can't wait to see what happens next, it's full of great personalities. Merry Christmas dude/girl!

"It that's too violent, I can get some markers and we can doodle on his face if you want..." XD Pure genius! And putting in 8 Melodies from Mother is just awesome. Finally someone who at least gets a little of Mother! Not to mention Lucario's outburst at Link and Pit's spying was just too good to read! I love your work,and keep up the awesome work! 3

This story is great keep it up!

Note: In chappie 13, Arceus is spelled wrong.

Dear Xybur7,
I really enjoyed this chapter, no, enjoy doesn't even cover it. I LOVED it.
You describe the happenings so I am able to picture it perfectly in front of me.
Please keep up the good work.
Love, Emi.