I like this story, with all its interweaving plots. Please continue writing for it; I want to know Madeline's plan and if she and Gilbert will get their happy ending.

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS AND YOUR OTHER STORIES

WAAAH! This is so cool! Please continue!

I like these scenes, especially the thing between Gil and Ludwig.

Anyway...Keep going.

Ice/Liech please? :3

Also I'm sad this is ending you gotta have a sequel you just got to! *shakes in anticipation*

Love it as always

Just this whole universe you got going here-I loooove it.

And I love Fem!Fin/Sweden.

Go, Tiina, go... live your dreams... How could I not love this chapter? XD

Poor Ludwig... Well, all you can do is keep updating.

Luciano, is a perfect name for their kid. ):

Sadness! D:

But things are sooo interesting thanks for updating!

I want the baby to be a girl!

A girl I tells ya!

Awesome as always

Very gut chapter aaaaa

Oh gosh... so much drama... Starvation, Lars has tuberculosis (I think), and all the other stuff! It's so exciting! As for grammar and that, I couldn't find any mistakes.

I love this story

And when you update it. :D

Wow you guys have duke of ed too. Wait youre from the uk so that makes perfect sense. Hmm as for tactics for trench warfare you can check what they did when germany invaded france, like Somme. I think they put barbed wire and landmines about...aww poor lars. Monaco reminds me of belarus. Oh no who got attacked? And go Gil, of course he'll find some way to talk to maddy~

Something bad just happened to Eduard, methinks...

This is just what I needed on a Friday, thanks for your update. 3