great! good interaction between raven and terra and great job protraying terra's thoughts.

Hmm ... it's good to know what was going through her mind that evening. The dialogue was tight, and not overdone. And you handle grammar well.

It would be nice, if you ever get the urge, to do a similar piece on what's going through her mind:

A - after she runs away the first time thinking BB betrayed her trust, or

B - after she and BB part ways at the amusement park and she returns to Slade. May hell's demons dine on his remaining eye.

I found this in famousgirl01's Favorites list, in case you wondered.

Really Good! :)

Ya know, I didn't know what to think when I clicked on this. I have to say kudos though, its pretty damn good. It's rare to see this pairing, whether its friendship or whatever. I think you did a good job in keeping them in character with Raven's awkwardness and Terra's uncertainity. Good luck in your future endeavors. Keep rockin