Please can you update

lol update soon!

Just finished the first 2 chapters even though they are short they are still really good!

Oooohhhh! Love is in the air yet gingers might ruin it kind of like what people say about the old Spider-Man!

I love it! Please write more, I love Harry'Hermione as a brother/sister relationship ;)

This is great, I hope you update soon :) I would love to see one where harry and Hermione see the photos eventually:)

What a fantastic name for a story. And I particularly love Hermione's observation: 'He never attacks till the end of the school year.' LOL That's so true.

Its amusing

"A Weasley infection." LOL, that's genius. :)
"I just wish we could find the cure to this insufferable disease while curing thick headedness as well." Totally true! :)
"Besides, it's only December. He never attacks till the end of the school year. I've noticed a pattern." That's true as well! So like Hermione to say that. :D

-Capitalization. It's "Two-thirds", not "Two-Thirds". It's "Runes" not "rune" and "History of Magic", not "history of magic". It's "homework", not "Homework" and it's "loud", not "Loud".
-Punctuation.
-Tenses: you slipped from past tense into present tense in the beginning.
-There's a hyphen between "sixth-years". There's also a hyphen between "thick-headedness".
-The title should be shorter and the words in the title should be capitalized, except for words like "the" and "of", etc. You can write the title in the summary. What I mean is, you can change the summary to "The tale of a green-eyed brother and a brown-eyed sister." (It shouldn't be "A tale ..." It should be "The tale ...")
-An Author's Note in the middle of the story only deteriorates it. It spoils the mood. Don't insert one in the middle of the story.
-The words "Daily Prophet" should be italicized.
-Sissy is not Bellatrix's nickname; it's Bellatrix's nickname for Narcissa. And it's Cissy, not Sissy. Besides, how does Hermione know that it's Bellatrix's nickname for Narcissa? I don't have Deathly Hallows beside me right now so I don't really know whether Bella called Narcissa Cissy in Malfoy Manor but even so, that is a year after this story.
-"Harry," Yawn….
Yawns, "Yah?"
"No more late night sibling talks for a while. I mean we didn't even finish our Homework!"
"Hermione, just ,Yawn, go back to sleep…" And Harry is out like a light again.
This could be better written as:
"Harry?" Hermione says, yawning loudly. [That is, assuming you're sticking to present tense.]
Harry copies her. "Yah?" [Or "Yeah?", but it's your choice.]
"No more late-night sibling talks for a while ... I mean, we didn't even finish our homework!"
"Hermione, just -" Harry yawns once more "- go back to sleep ..." And he is out like a light again.
I love the last line. :)
So, you have lots of potential and, if polished, your writing skills can become golden. I hope you don't take offense to the constructive criticism I'm giving you (like some authors do) because that is how we all become better writers - by accepting and following constructive criticism. :) I was also a bit stung after I received my first piece of constructive criticism (oh dear, I'm using those two words a lot, aren't I? :D) but then I realised that it was for the best.

love it bro!

Good.

Feels forced and cliche. There's a good reason for that, but if you're going to insist on writing a harry/hermione friendship fic, you probably ought to at least try to make it feel organic rather than just a statement saying 'Hey, we're brother and sister right?'

At least your spelling and grammar seem decent enough to make the fic readable, even if the content doesn't.

If you want reviews that are more mindlessly favorable, change the listing from Harry/Hermione to Harry/Ginny or Ron/Hermione. You won't recieve a good reception here with mindless and heavy-handed repetition here like you would there.

Awww, this was so cute! D

Good. I'm sure Hermione was very pleased probably since no one threw her a surprise part before. Please post the next chapter soon.

And I see you favorited my story Another Wedding at the Burrow, so I'm asking, please leave a review for me as well.

Ha! That's cute, but I'm now wondering - what will Ron and Ginny think?