Hey! That was some pretty nice fanfiction! :3

i hope you update this soon. :)

Bwah! ;-; I just saw the movie today and I read book... well, when I was still a kid, and I gotta say the ending of the movie made me cry! It was just so... emotional! ToT And Oncie is so lovable! And then when Lorax and him reunited, GUSH I JUST EXPLODED. ;w; So many feels. I cannot control them!

And I liked it so far! Your writing skills are rather admirable... I cannot wait to see what you do with this! c:

I'm gonna read the next chappie now! :D

Sprinkles and pancakes, Marcy 3

I actually loved this long chapter! Great job, I really loved Oncie optimism and thick skin! I know someone who would buy your stuff, Oncie... Heh heh :3

May's reaction to having a boy was just like I'd thought it would be. Its a shame they have to return all the dresses, but little Steriling Once-ler too cute!

I love that there's a plot to this aside from just telling the story... Amazing! The Lora is very sweet to Oncie and I'm glad Oncie (I just love saying that xD) is willing to tell the story!

Update soon!

Great! I've always wanted to read a story based on The Once-ler's life!

Aw, Lorax is so cute :3 of course he wants Pancakes, Oncie :)

I honestly fangirled when I read about Liam!

Can't wait to read on

Great chapter :) I love fanfics about once-let's past. I can't really blame once-ler's mum for being angry I think I wld b too lol ( I found it amusing that my middle name is Mary-Ann lol)
Anyway great chapter and looking forward to another :D (by the way if your finding it hard to find the motivation to write more, I find it helps by listening to music or watching some short movie clips :3 hope that helps)

So..awesome...*O*

Looks like Ted isn't the only one to get tha treatment.

I don't know why but I found his name really amusing XD but anyway great story please continue :)

I really love the first chapter and I ho

Woot:D This is great! I hope you update soon! -

Hmmm... You count the months you're in each fandom? I've been in too many to do that... Naruto (akatsuki), Dolllhouse, Bones, House M.D,so many others... Sorry, reminiscing there :) Nayway, this story is pretty cool, even though I like the Idea of Once-ler as a first name.

I have always woundered about Oncies last name.. And what happened to his dad.

Update soon! I love it 3

I love it so far! Do continue ~

I have always woundered about Oncies name...

Cute!

Please continue :3