Where to start? Well, I would like to say first and foremost that this is no doubt one of the greatest fanfics on this website that I have ever read. From beginning to end, this story was incredibly poignant and captivating! I thought you also created a wonderful portrayal of the Once-ler, and captured every aspect of his personality as well as giving us a new perspective of him. As much as I love Ted x Audrey, I must admit you had me shipping this wholeheartedly! Please continue this brilliant work of literature, or write more Once-ler x Audrey fanfics. God bless you, beautiful brilliant author you are!

Ok, you've officially gotten me into this pairing. ;-; Amazing story, it kinda made me tear up a little. Awesome job. :3

ADCHOURGBYFF

THAT WAS LOVELY.

*throws self down to grovel at your feet*

I don't care what anyone says, Audler is so awesome to read, and this has to be my favorite fic for it yet!

If it wasn't 5 AM where I am right now I would probably leave a more comprehensible review, but all I have to say is...

AHHHH SO ADORABLE/TRAGIC. AND OHHH I LOVED THE ONCE-LER'S CHARACTERIZATION. And that one line: "I don't." IT MADE MY HEART WRENCH. AHHHH THE FEELSSS.

...Great job. ;)

-Albino Shadowz

Great oneshot! I really like your Greed-ler, and how you put Audrey in the story. Nice work!

Nice! I like it! Never read this pairing before but I enjoyed it. Great job on pulling this from the drawing.

*sobs* I applaud you and your beautiful story

O_O Dude this is SOO awesome! Probably the best Once-ler fic I've ever read! I think you should continue this! Or make another Once-ler x Audrey fic cuz i think its really cute :) And you seem to have a gift for it! Think about it :)

So tragic!

I love this story...sad it's over, but keep writing! :)

oh wow. this actually put a lump in my throat. i wish this wasn't a once-shot and could continue. thank you for the lovely read

Wow, this was really, really good! I loved how seamlessly Audrey fit into the Once-ler's story. Great job!

Such beautiful perfection! I definitely like your portrayal of Greedler- he's wonderful in every way. Keep up the great work!

O-oh my god. YOU FANFIC'D MY LATE-NIGHT DOODLE INTO SOMETHING AMAZING. ;A; This is perfect, I love it so much, you have no idea!

I'll just hide in a corner now and cry over how amazing this is fsghfkjfk

Oh my gosh, I loved this! :) Poor Oncie! XD I actually have a very similar idea, but rather than a group of activists it's just one xD

Anyway, thank you for a lovely little one shot! Keep writing :D

EDITH

This. Is. Fantastic. Seriously, one of the best fics I've read in this fandom. I love it.

I like your interpretatipn of Greedler. Much prefer it to the playboy sort of persona a lot of people are giving him. I mean, that other one's amusing and all, but it just doesn't fit with his character the way this one does.