| Reviews for Fullmetal Alchemist and the Order of the Pheonix |
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   The Makamis chapter 3 . 8/17 pretty pretty please continue, I absolutely love what you're doing with Ed's character and to be honest I wish there were more writers in the world like you. All in all, even if you don't continue I wish you the best. Good luck! P.S apparently I had already reviewed even though I don't remember it soo... yeah. |
| The Makamis chapter 4 . 4/10 I love this story! It shows things I haven't seen in many other fanfics and you're doing amazing even though you probably won't continue due to it being 5 years ago that you made this, I still want to complement your writing ability. |
| Just a human chapter 4 . 6/28/2017 THIS IS SO GOOD! PLEASE WRITE MORE! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/27/2017 Loving it so far? Please update! |
| dontaskk chapter 4 . 9/17/2016 are u going to continue this? i realllyy wanna read more so please do |
| guest the cat chapter 4 . 9/10/2016 I get that you have a wonderful life but could you please update , pretty please . |
| Mental Incapacity chapter 4 . 6/8/2016 More please |
| SoulMore chapter 4 . 4/1/2016 FAN!~ |
| jadeblackheart4 chapter 4 . 3/1/2016 love this chapter! cant wait for more! XD |
| jadeblackheart4 chapter 1 . 3/1/2016 LOVE THIS~! XD |
| wolf of infinity chapter 4 . 12/11/2015 I had almost forgotten about this story '' I'm impressed you found the motivation to keep writing this, and didn't just give up on it. :) The story is interesting, although I can't help but feel that Edward is being a little unnecessarily rude. Sure, he's feisty, but I don't really find him a character who's constantly grumpy and dislikes people. Though that might be because of his situation in this story, which could make any sensible alchemist a bit grumpy I don't know. You're the writer, and this is your story, so it's your choice how to portray the characters, and I respect that. :) Good luck writing more! |
| TheCandyChild chapter 4 . 12/1/2015 Looved it! I don't think Ed would be that hostile, though. I also think he might've let Mrs. Weasley mother him, just a tiny bit. Can't wait 'till Ed starts teaching. Those poor students |
| alqui chapter 4 . 10/20/2015 This is the best Fullmetal Alchemist and Harry Potter crossover I have read so far. Ed doesn't swear in every two sentences. He is more like canon Ed, intelligent and not wanting to beat every single person up. You also didn't show every inner thought, but skipped to the part where he is showing some understanding of magic. A very well written story all in all. |
| tiara123458 chapter 4 . 10/17/2015 I love this story so far, and I sincerely hope that you will be updating soon! Good day (Or night)! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/7/2015 I found some spelling mistakes. But they were so few and far between that they didn't drastically effect or ruin the story. I am looking forward to reading future chapters! :) |
