Mastersgtjames, do you realize how stupid your comment about her work hours and money situation is? She is rich you moron.

this reads like a bad soap opera.

stress isnt good for you... either of you.

MC is about as subtle as a brick to the face.

I mean... I feel like the author does not get economics? or business? cuz MC has described her working hours and the amount of traffic her store gets. There is no way she could afford to pay an employee minimum wage. Let alone 15 an hour. She is now running her store in the red.

JESUS. REALLY!? telling literally anyone who even remotely asks everything about yourself including strengths and weaknesses. As though you have never had anyone betray you before or that you have no concept of secrets or Operational Security.
Then this nonsense with her apologizing to Rogue, MC was sure of herself and confident. Now she is shy and meek. Really? come one already.
Apologizing to rogue when she was the one avoiding you?

wow thats dumb. I mean. The story was progressing nicely and everything until the robber. Now it is beyond unrealistic. I mean. She is seemingly uncaring about the fact Xavier tried to break through her mental shields. That he violated Rogues mind to learn her secrets. That everyone and their brother is seemingly violating the statute of secrecy. I mean... REALLY!? ugh.

uh. Imma call BS. first, no way is MC with her Massive magical reserves, and PheonixxBasilix self going to be weaker than Xavier. Then, where is the magic? seriously, nothing to protect against thieves? no intent wards? no charms/enchantments to protect against bullets?

Lol ororo was hilarious

LOL, was not expecting Ororo to use the arousal items for self-relaxation purposes.

Please update soon. Last update was 2014

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More please

Only wish there is more.

nooooo. :( i want more.

it will have been give years since you left this story on that cliffhanger so it looks like we will never know rogue's answer. to bad I greatly enjoyed reading this story