Ive read many stories where two people find console in each other to forget about the past and hardships. But this one was my favorite, it had so much depth poured into it, and it was smutty but not too smutty. You did a wonderful job writing this!

I love how you write! And I like how you manage to show their feeling through their eyes, they gazes; wonderfully done.

Their cycle of misery was strangely beautiful. Their emotions were captured to the fullest. And their need for each other was clearly displayed.

I liked this a lot, and what made it even better was taking your advice and listening the rain while I read this.

That was beautifully written. I love how it had an overall dark tone. Kakashi and Sakura's relationship was based on raw need cleft me wanting more! Great job.

Beautiful

I love it. Very well done. It was very sad but so beautiful. I like this as a one shot but I think you could add more or a sequel. :) They act like they are just using each others bodies for emotional comfort but from what I read it seems to me that there is a lot more going on under the surface. I don't know what I'm trying to say. I just like this idea of yours and I think you could do more with it. Although maybe I'm just a sucker for Kakashi/Sakura parrings and I like how you potray them.

Oooooh, I like this. Dark, and sensual, without being shamelessly dirty. Full of emotion and pain and and and... this is really, really good. Perfect for them, in a very angsty way. Good job!

I love that this oneshot has a very deep meaning, not just a well-written smut. Although this is already an amazing oneshot, I agree that this deserves another chapter or two showing how their feelings evolve into a deeper one. Nice job! Ü

Beautifully done!

Beautifully done. I love the emotion and the intensity you've created between them. Although I do want to know more, this one-shot is perfect as it is. Thank you for sharing.

I find it really interesting that you haven't included their names at all - somehow it seems to intensify the emotion that you have built up brilliantly. Seriously, great job. Your choice of words and senses rather than unnecessary build-up make the main focus hit like a ton of erotic bricks. Nice one!

Kashi-Cookie-Monster

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I do like this as a one-shot, the emotion is real and the need palpable. You did leave room for a continuation. Once again, I like this as a one-shot, but my romantic side desperately wants you to make it a two-shot with part two having them build a real life together.

P.S. I notice you've done two dirty one-shots this week; I just wanted to say that if that's the mood you're in you could always put one in the next chapter of HCBD. All you would have to do would be for Sakura to have a vivid dream about the night she shared with Kakashi's counterpart, or even just a fantasy about what she would like to happen. _v

There's meaning behind their coupling, and I think you convey that well, 'Mango.