I love this. I love that you made just a dialogue so engaging. Awesome.

Well damn. This was basically the most perfect interpretations of Jeff and Annie I think I've ever read. I just want to remember it forever, or send it to Harmon and make him actually use it. Looks like I have a new favorite author. Amazing job.

omg! it's like a train wreck with these two. lol.

WOW. All dialogue and no indication of who is who at first but I got it. Perfectly. You should be writing for the show! :)

Good God, where have you been all my life?

Okay, that was me gushing and being melodramatic, but still, HOLY SHIT, WAS THIS BEAUTIFUL! the perfect, perfect, perfect dialogue, the banter, the intelligent humour, the references, the low-key drama with a kind of self-aware comedy, it's so brilliant it actually hurts, really, really hurts, because I want to go back and put this scene in that episode and I would be willing to change space and time as we know it just to do this, just for this. You got Annie and Jeff so right I'm almost tempted to think you're Dan Harmon, trying your hand at fanfiction just to play with the audience's mind. You. Are. Amazing.