What a dark romance. If Madara were to love someone, it would certainly be as deeply and as passionately as portrayed in this story. You certainly captured Madara well.

great shame its only a oneshot

that was really good! x3

Absolutely perfect! Wow, what can I say. MadaMito is the perfect crack. Best fic with them out there. Though there are only three all three are great and I believe yours is my favorite. I have a hard time saying what I love about it because I simply loved every bit.

So dark, so deep and oddly enough highly romantic. Sure, we'll never see Madara out of control like this but I can definitely see him getting all kinds of crazy over having feelings for someone. I can also see him getting extremely crazy if that love also belongs to the only man he ever admired. Him not having someone he wants, he reacted how I expected.

Your portrayal of Mito was great too. So strong and classy yet very able to take care of herself. Seeing her be defiant to the very end and swear her love to Hashirama was perfect. If it was one of those "Oh, I really enjoyed this." It'd take away from the hate she had in the begging.

There's not much more I can say without rambling on and on. It was perfect. It's been in my favorites but I had not reviewed until now. :)

This was very interesting. I liked the portrayal of Mito, but I would have liked to see Madara a little more in control of himself. That being said, it was beautifully written and would not have had the same amount of power if Madara wasn't in the state that he was. I very much enjoyed it! Great job!

Cheers!

~Of Broken Love~