Reviews for Erin
Joannrbb chapter 46 . 5/29
Loved the whole story. Easy to read and had a great story line with sexy times. What's not to love.
CharmH chapter 12 . 4/18
Beautiful! There is just absolute beauty in Jane and Maura's love for each other. Your fluff is stunning! Thank you.
CharmH chapter 11 . 4/18
Jane was clever in not going up with Maura so she could get ready for the club. She would then not be a witness to Maura using coke, it gives her plausible deniability.

Nobody can blame Maura for using here, as far as I am concerned. If anybody does, they do not have a strong enough imagination to put themselves in Maura's shoes here.
CharmH chapter 10 . 4/18
I think this sounds and smells like trouble for Jane and Maura.
CharmH chapter 9 . 4/17
Their first time together was more than satisfying. It was scorching HOT!
CharmH chapter 8 . 4/17
Jane loves to spoil Maura. *big smile* Maura just had to tease the other dancing girls by kissing Jane in front of them. I can tell from your excellent writing that Jane and Maura are enjoying getting to know each other.
CharmH chapter 7 . 4/17
The salsa dancing was exactly what I expected from Jane. I loved their first official date. Jane really went out of her way to treat Maura to something special.
CharmH chapter 6 . 4/17
The Maura that I am getting to know here in your story is breaking my heart. For her I will rip her Father's throat out.

I respect Jane immensely for wanting to wait and get to know Maura better, before going to bed with her. She actually wants to try and build a relationship with Maura. This is very sweet and loving.
CharmH chapter 5 . 4/17
I liked Jane and Maura's first date. Jane meeting Constance was a big surprise. *big smile*

I can understand now why there was never money for Maura to go and study. Why she is working as a stripper at the moment. Her father being abusive and her having to run away could not have been easy.
CharmH chapter 4 . 4/17
I would love to know what is in the drinks that Erin, aka Maura, has between sets 2 and 3.
CharmH chapter 3 . 4/17
LOL Jane a bouncer? She has fallen head over her badge for Maura. Who wouldn’t?
CharmH chapter 2 . 4/17
This is definitely an AU story. Maura a stripper and on the poor side is very AU. I like it. You have me hooked in with curiosity.
CharmH chapter 1 . 4/17
I like the beginning! A Jane that does not hide her sexuality. Love it!
Scoundrel73 chapter 46 . 10/11/2019
Picked up this one while scrolling for some Rizzles and it did not disappoint. Thank you!
lealover chapter 46 . 5/20/2018
very different storyline but really enjoyable, loved it;-)
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