Please Write a part two!

Delicate touches, and strong themes, slightly marred by its brevity. I thought it could have used a little more space, more room. That apart, liked the piece, princess.

I really like this story.

Well I enjoyed it, it's pleasurable to read a well written story that has Charles and Erik as friends and not enemies. Then you added mental hospital, well I'm already hooked with that.

My only qualm was when chuck said "... love." It's kind of OOC for him, not matter his country of origin or yours. Also even if he where to use it, it just seems to personal at such a early stage in the story.

It's was marvelous seeing a character that even the all powerful, terrifying Magneto is crippled by. Especially since their background stories are so similar.

I throughly enjoyed it and hope that you continue. I would love to see what happens next. Does she get better? Does she even stay? If she stays,will chuck help her with her powers? Will her and Erik get romantic?( I mean he's like her savior now. She might start to like him more then as a friend, if you catch my drift)
- DNL235

Ohh please make more please please please

Great story. loved it. A sequel would be nice ;)

This is really good and I would really like to read more!.