i love dark Lokane! its true that Jane held her own darkness, she was obsessed with her job and if she wasn't becareful, it will lead her into the darkness.
i think Jane in MCU very underated and i love your Jane!

I have enjoyed this story very much, such a joy to find. Hopefully I will be reading more from you again.

Very good!

Wow! I love this story and Lokane :-)

I want more! I love this story!

I really liked this story; your imagery was amazing—really well done. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it—thank you so much for this story. I especially liked your plot, it was very interesting.

This. Was. Bloody. Fantastic. Just; Wowza.

Wow.. This was simply amazing! I really loved it!

Wow, not bad! I like this. I didn't think I would enjoy a Loki/Jane piece but I found this believable and an enjoyable read. Ty!

Brilliant

goodness,i smiled like a maniac all the way on reading this xD i love it,hell a lot!3 you are officially one of my favourite author xD!

Beautiful. I just love how Loki's vision of Midgard was positive.

Very good for a short story definitely worth the half hour :D

I truly am speechless. . . I have read a handful of Lokane fanfictions but this one is the most mind blowing. The plot twists and changes you've made for this AU have left my breathless! I was torn and yet strangely satisfied with the turn of events. I am glad that Loki turned out to be a good King and that he was able to receive the love he had so craved. And I'm glad that Jane became her own person and was able to make her own decision.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this excellent fanfiction! I absolutely loved every second of it!

Lyn Harkeran

Wow loved it, very very nicely written. Thanks.