| Reviews for Before Mars |
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My Dark Wonderland chapter 1 . 8/18/2012 Wow! Just wow. Me and my friend were sitting here dying while reading this. We're not used to Dominate!Kaidan stories and you made us a fan. Very nice! |
Dorkolicious chapter 1 . 7/5/2012 Yep. I totally rewrote the begging of ME3 in my mind to include this. Steamy steamy goodness |
sam623 chapter 1 . 5/13/2012 sdjfkl;asdlkfjasld Good god! Awesome. Just awesome. *fans self* |
AlphaBravoIndia chapter 1 . 4/14/2012 DAMN. Really sexy! |
quantumparadigm chapter 1 . 4/14/2012 Rawr! This was hot! And so very well-written ;) |
Defii chapter 1 . 4/14/2012 Having read this, and the reviews, I will say this - Major does outrank Commander, whether it be staff commander, or lt commander, or whatever. It even says so in the Mass Effect Wiki. :p This was hott, for sure! I likes me a dominant Kaidan. Mmmm. Very nice! |
YellowJay22 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012 Gah! Dominant!Kaidan is a personal weakness. And I read the review below. Major outranks Commander. Kaidan can't "command" the ship. But technically Kaidan could...basically relieve her of duty if she's not right in the head. So, LET KAIDAN OUTRANK SHEPARD. AND LET IT BE SMUTTY. |
fromthecornerofhiseye chapter 1 . 4/13/2012 *fans self* Really liked the story, but commander outranks major (nato rank codes) :) poor Shepard is still in command |
Jenna53 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012 That was hot, thanks. |
ottgeekgirl chapter 1 . 4/13/2012 Very hawt...You can write a steamy Shenko fic anytime. |
Sones chapter 1 . 4/13/2012 Haawt I liked it, you're very talented to write steamy scenes, I can feel the tension between these two. So nice oneshot. |