This story looks cool can't wait for the next update.

Awesome story so far.

I love Zorua so much! The Story is the most descriptive pod story I've read. It not simply a retelling of pmd 2 either. The best part of this so far is the your really starting to get into konners mind. The first chapter you can already see his reckless gusto but you also see him struggling to except and get used to the postion he's stuck in. I like that he stands up for someone he's only known for a few minutes. It was funny how the moment was instantly killed the moment he fell on his face. Him beating people up with a sneeze was genius! Lol keep up the story.

Nice chapter.

Awesome story so far! Can't wait for the next update :)

-Fluffy

Really good so far, well written chapter with a great start. Just keep an eye out for grammar mistakes and you'll be on to a winner.

Nice chapter.