so great!

Good luck explaining that one, Danny.

I can imagine as Danny is about to eat that cookie,a bunch of ghost come out of the protal cuz they smelt Danny's like"Youll get these Cookies iver my full dead body "And then Skulker is like"That can be arranged Whelp"Then Danny goes ghost"Couldnt have just walked ive gotta destroy you "And Danny starts fighting the ghost freezing any that get to close to His cookie'sAnd when he wins hes standing one top of thrm all shoving cookies in his mouth yelling"MY GHOST COOKIES!MINE!"

Aaaa this is such a clever and adorable reveal idea! I was struck while reading this with the unique combination of dread, and wanting to giggle. Lovely! Thank you for writing this!

lol yes

That was the best cliffhanger I have ever read.

this was a hilarious quick read! Super original. I had to put it down for a minute I was laughing so hard! I'd really appreciate a sequel to this amazing chapter.. Beautiful job!

I totally can imagin Danny grabbing all ghost cookies and eating them at once. But Still I would apreciate a second chapter. How Maddie will react, to the fact, that Danny ate the cookies, because he is halfghost and won't get a poisoning.

This story is really good! So good, in fact, it made me crave some cookies...Anyway, this was a really original and entertaining read! Definitely something that I've never seen before. Great job!

Yes he wants another ghost cookie! give him another cookie!

Ooh! I think Cookie monster still be curious about these first cookies.

This can't be it! Can it?

LMFAO THERE HAD BETTER BE A SEQUEL TO THIS!

Oh my goodness, why didnt you continue?

Ha, lol Maddie! Poor Danny, unkowingly having his secret revealed by cookies, of all things (that's what I expect will happen, anyways). Awesome job, I loved it!