think this is my third maybe forth time read. really well done

I love this story! It wasn't just some random smut. The actual emotions were present without you having to explain them. I definitely like how you showcased the fact that Van took a moment to realize what was wrong, and that he didn't immediately just fall into Hitomi's plan. Real relationships sometimes happen this way and I'm glad you didn't glamorize Hitomi's true intent: to rekindle not just sex, but romance. Kudos! Short, sweet, and effective!

I really liked it! I especially love the part when Hitomi 'gave up', it gave the dramatic effect.

liked it a lot! so sweet!

Great story, you did a good job !

It was very good! I liked it! But, you might want to change the rating. This gets alittle intense. I know they're married, but still...

Great job though ./. ;)