lol cute

Oh so cute. You are amazing! So many Makorra fanfics and they are all quality!

- Sera

Loved this one too! I'm loving all your LoK fics here.

I love your Makorra stories; they're all so impossibly cute! :D

I so called it! I had a feeling a line like the one at the end would come up in relation to kissing. This was great!

I don't see why you can't put all these great Makorra stories into one and make each chapter oneshots. That's up to you though.

Very original. Spectacular, I love your writing style.

Keep it up!

OMG! You're pretty talented. :]

That was super cute m'dear. _~

your authors note at the end oh my god

&so cute ah i'm all makorra fuck yeah

Owww so sweet

The story was good but the authors note at the end was hilarious.

Well done.

Mako is so awkward omg. PERFECT CHARACTERIZATION OF HIM. Nice job! :)

I LOVED this! Seriously, if the kiss happens, I want it to happen like this. I think you wrote Korra perfectly and I loved your description of the bending moves! I think you wrote the mood, setting and character really well - especially character. You can totally feel Korra's frustration as you read this. Awesome job! :)

~Analie~

PERFECTO! loved it! great job!