Lol. Do you play video games? Sbarge voices characters in Mass Effect and Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic too.

Cute idea. Thumblina totally suits Jiminy. :)

Cute story. I hope you update sometime soon :D

I'm glad you updated... it's been ages since I read the last chapter... thought u had abandoned it... Good chapter... hoping to read the next soon ;)please? I think the story is really original!
Ps: do you still have that crush on August, lol... I do, he became my fav...lol... but I still love Archie too... he's just so cutely nerdy ... personally both the actors are awesome and incredibly nice guys... I can't wait to see them meet this season ;)it's so strange they haven't met yet... and it so strange that Jiminy doesn't look much worried about where he is :(

I really loved this chapter and jiminy's admission at the ehd

I really like this and would love to see where you take it

I absolutely love this story you've come up with. Please, hurry up and write more! I honestly can't wait. Minny is such an interesting character and the way you've written her in is amazing. Archie and Minny's relationship is amusing and I can't wait to see what you hold for them in the future. Please, hurry back. I really want to read more!

awesome.

Sorry for my delay,but I'm here!
I feel so bad for her is gone,just like that,and what happens to Minny now?

please update soon!

I think that was a lovely chapter!thank you!

"If everyone's conscience sounded like Raphael Sbarge, there would be no more crime."

XD It was such a sweet moment, and then I burst out laughing... -shakes head and giggles-

Well, all I can say is nice work describing the translation from tall to so-very short. Also, I liked her reaction to Jiminy-it is a natural one, after all. And the fact that you were honest about his appearance. It would be fairly ugly, being a cricket. But the sweet interaction between the two of them followed nicely after. :)

Enjoy your camping trip! Travel safely!

Excellent chapter and well worth the wait. I like how you're alternating between both worlds. It's nice to see Jiminy and Thumbelina initially meeting and interacting in both.

Keep up the great work!

yay new chapter, I was happy to see an update :3 cant wait for the next one

Hi! You've got a great thing going here, and I hope you update soon!

The characters are all written perfectly. It's like watching an episode of OUAT. Looking forward to the next chapter! :D

P.S. I don't know if you're into video games, but if you're a Sbarge fan, he does the voice acting for the character Kaidan Alenko in the game Mass Effect. It's worth checking out. His voice is so swoon-y! ;)

I really enjoyed this! You've got some nice characterization going on, and I am really enjoying your portrayal of Achie/Jiminy. It almost feels like we're watching the show via his mannerisms and speech.

I look forward to seeing what happens between him and "Minny" next. :)