So good! Please update!

After reading this I'm not sure if I want to hug Kai then go fan girl or punch him and say 'NOW YOU FIGURE IT OUT IDIOT!'
Great story though! (:

I'm glad he figured it out in this, cinder had to full out say " I'm princess Selene" in cress

Ooooooooooh ;p

Omg, I have been wanting to read Kai's pic for a whole and you nailed it. It's amazing, really good.

I really, really enjoyed this. I finally got to read an interpretation of Kai thoughts that I felt meshed with the events of Cinder and what we know of his personality.

Thanks for sharing this. Hope you're looking forward to the next installment!

That was Amazing!

ahhhhhh awesome please write more sooooo good

Wow, I like it! :)

I am halfway through Scarlet right now, to one of the really suspenseful parts, and I was like "I can't handle this right now, I need a breather." I WISH KAI WOULD REALLY SAY THIS!

There's honestly not a lot of fanfiction for Cinder, but I was really pleased when I found this! Thank you so much for sharing this, and I hope you write more! :)

"He wanted to see her, so bad." *badly
This is beautifully done.

The best Lunar Chronicles fanfiction yet! Totally seems like Marrisa Meyer's writing and you capture his thoughts perfectly!

You should continue the story line.

There aren't much Lunar Chronicles fanfics, but I'm glad I found this one. Great job.