oh my god... this story is so sad... ;_; i read the whole thing in one... ok, i have to admit that at the beginning, chapter 2, 3 or what it was, when only peter and norman talked for example about the things that had happened, i didn't read it really carefully or only took a look at it, but well... "

your story is SO good written! i was really thrilled at the battle and had to know how it ended, but... it's very tragic... when i read the last chapter i really wished that you would continue with an happy end... you know, i think, spider-man (as spider-man 2) is a really tragic movie anyway and your fanfic tops that ;_; oh and one more fact is that harry is my favourite character and i really like the triangle between him, his best friend and his father... and usually i read slash *lol* but this fanfic was *GREAT* ! i would really like you to write another one, perhaps after spider-man 2 or something... altough norman is gone by then... ._. well, at least it seems so %D

loving it

I was looking for a Harry Osborne fic, and I wasn't disappointed! You had the characters down to a T, the fight scene was vivid and detailed, it kept interesting right up to the end- which left a sour note. It's too bad Peter didn't tell Harry the truth, though it would seem umplausable, I really wanted those two to have a happy ending! Very sad, hope there's a sequal in store! A favorite of mine for sure, stayed up to read all 12 chapters in a row!

An excellent story! It needed MJ, though, and you made it sound as if Peter and Harry were gay lovers or something. uhg...

*sniffles* You should have told him Peter... Oh, Harry... What a waste...

Well, excellent ending to an excellent fic. I'll be there for your next fic(s), hopefully they'll be there soon. ;-)

The best way of ending it, of course. *depressed sigh* Poor Harry. Poor Peter too, but poor Harry. Well, let's see how he deals with it in the next chapter... that is, if it's about that.

WHAT? When in doubt and confusion, kill one of them? Honestly! I mean, if he was aiming for the Green Goblin, I'd find it just as irrational! I'm not asking that Harry chooses a version or whatnot right now, but truthfully! Kill Spiderman now that he's all confused! That's stupid! Oh, okay, he's all hateful and all. But he LISTENED to both men, he heard Spidey's version as well as the Goblin's, so why on Earth should he choose to believe one of them over the other? He said it himself: they're both murderers! (for him). You don't kill first and ask questions later! Oooh, I'm so angry at Harry right now!

Oh my God! Not Harry! I mean, yeah he can be an ass sometimes but not Harry! Oooh, and Peter who's so hurt! Ooooh!

Okay, time to read on. GOBLIN, YOU'RE GOING DOWN! I don't care whose body you inhabit. I long ago grieved for the death of Mr Osborn. For me, he is already dead if YOU are in control. Oooh!

Hiya! I'm here to offer constructive criticism this time... ahem... I was just wondering about a couple things (which may come explained in the next chapters, I dunno, I have yet to read them):

1- Where did MJ go? I realise she's not the main focus of this fic, and that's cool, but I don't think Peter would have erased her from his life. Sure, Peter's not the main focus, most of the time, so maybe that's why we don't get to see her, or hear about her (I don't see Harry talking about her with Peter or his dad, for example). But still... which leads us to:

2- Wouldn't Peter have tried to warn (how? I don't know, cuz without giving away his secret identity...) both Aunt May and MJ? At least keep a tight watch over them? And it's not mentionned. I mean, if he's so freaked out (with reason at that) about the Green Goblin being back...

Okay, that's all. Just wondering. It's not even criticim, actually, it's two questions that have been "eating me up" more and more, so...

As always, keep writing, and onto the next chapter now!

Okay, okay... So the worst was avoided... Though I'm not sure what the worst would be. So many possibilites...

Anyway, brilliantly written, I'm so glad I didn't stumble accross that fic at its beginning... Though soon, I shall join the crowds of waiting people!

*tense smile* I don't hate you. See? I really don't. PETER, MOVE!

Oh God. What with what just happened, the fact that he's going to his room alone with Peter AND the title for next chapter (not to mention the "warning" in the disclaimer at the beginning)... all points out to a very very bad next chapter. Kick-ass maybe but bad... Oooh... I'm traumatised already. Gotta keep reading now! I'm hooked!

Wow. I'm totally taken in. How... I was holding my breath the whole time Peter was in the room with Mr Osborn. *giggles* I'm even calling him Mr Osborn, not Norman. Cuz he's older. *shakes her head* Honestly... I really thought he'd let something slip, like: "Peter Parker... Spiderman..." Though, of course, Harry wouldn't have gotten it, would have thought it was only shock or something... Still... What the hell happened? Is it really Mr Osborn? *frowns*

What? Oh my God! I just discovered this fanfiction (I had stored it for later, under "promising fanfic") and OH MY GOD again! Promising indeed! I lack the words, obviously... Now that's a twist! I love Harry, even though he can be an ass (let's call a cat a cat), and I had nothing against Norman Osborn (not the Green Goblin, but the man), except that he could be an ass too! grrrr... Okay, onto some more reading; Oh my God. I just thought of some of the implications... And how can this be? It can't... What...

One action.

*Swoon*