I loved everything about this but what I loved the most was how well you nailed Platinums personality it was perfect and the moments with Silver were funny and cute

D'aww... It was cute how they all were supporting Blue. And Platinum's naivete makes me smile. I like the references to HtG. Nicely done! :3

I love Ruby, my gosh, this one was sweet too! Wow, that's a cool and interesting headcanon!

Utterly delightful read!

The character interactions were pleasant, and I found Blue and Silver to be such an adorable pair of siblings!

Ahhhhhh the feels in this story. Blue/Green are so adorable and assdfghjkl at first I thought this would be kinda sad because of Green' s rejection and all that but it turned out adorably cute and yessss my shipper heart is happy

Amazing!

AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW THE EENNNDDDIINNNGGGGG XX))))))) you did an awesome job at getting all their personalities perfect. I LOVE THIS SERIES XD silver was amazing in this story :D

You are amazing. i love your stories, you capture the dex holders personlities perfectly! the bond between Silver and Blue is sweet, and Green was his usual self xD i love the ending, and the symbolism, too...i hope you keep writing stories for Pokespe, you are incredible!
-Cricket

Beautiful.

I love how you incorporate the water cycle in each of the water dex-holders' personalities.
You are seriously such a great writer. I can't even.

I love you, and your stories /brick

do upload the Grass teams C:

I love, love, LOVE Ruby in this, which surprises me since I can't recall ever feeling very strongly about his character one way or the other. I loved his bravado, and his confidence, and his courage. I particularly love this bit:

"You shouldn't let anyone, let alone a man, decide if you're pretty or not," Ruby tells her, cradling his head in one hand. "My master taught me that beauty comes from in here and shines out." He prods his chest to demonstrate. "Why do you think I like contests so much? It's because anyone can be beautiful as long as they put in the effort. I enjoy being a part of that."

I also quite adore Platinum's dazed sort of genius, and how she comforts Blue with a hug; such an interesting contrast to Silver, who is obviously very protective of Blue but evidently hesitant to physically show it.

And as OldRivalShipping is my absolute Pokemon OTP, I've no complaints there.

The mood in this piece is so very different from "Hide the Guns" - I'm looking forward to the Grass-starter fic. (Which, hopefully, ties into this piece, and brings all twelve Dexholders together.)

- the blanket

Oh my god.

Silver, y u so brotherly?

I just love Silver in here! I just love his relationship with others. It seems he was already over his arrogant, bratty self from the GSC arc (thank Gold and his immaturity), and that this fic shows how Silver relates with others, other than Blue (which we are all familiar of). His relationship with others was just so adorable! Especially the little scenes with Platinum and him in the background. Who knew that with those two together, Platinum would look so retarded. HAHA. Even Ruby shares a different look when Silver is present. He actually looks gay-er than his usual girly-boy self. (Or it's just because I now think of Silver as perfect).

The Silver-Green part of Blue-Green-Silver is what I love most in this fic.

"Pesky woman. She doesn't need to waste effort on this," he sighs.

"You don't appreciate Blue at all," Silver grumbles despite himself.

Green kneads the knot between his eyes. "That's not what I meant," he whispers.

THIS. (Is this finally the start of something new? HAHA.)

Compared to Gold, Silver CAN make coherent decisions. I also think that he finally has respect for Green (but not much on Blue's feelings toward him, he doubts it but he's given no choice since he sees her happy with him)

Gahd, I love you Silver.

Hoping for a Grass starter sequel, no?

Oh my god.

Silver, y u so brotherly?

I just love Silver in here! I just love his relationship with others. It seems he was already over his arrogant, bratty self from the GSC arc (thank Gold and his immaturity), and that this fic shows how Silver relates with others, other than Blue (which we are all familiar of). His relationship with others was just so adorable! Especially the little scenes with Platinum and him in the background. Who knew that with those two together, Platinum would look so retarded. HAHA. Even Ruby shares a different look when Silver is present. He actually looks gay-er than his usual girly-boy self. (Or it's just because I now think of Silver as perfect).

The Silver-Green part of Blue-Green-Silver is what I love most in this fic.

"Pesky woman. She doesn't need to waste effort on this," he sighs.

"You don't appreciate Blue at all," Silver grumbles despite himself.

Green kneads the knot between his eyes. "That's not what I meant," he whispers.

THIS. (Is this finally the start of something new? HAHA.)

Compared to Gold, Silver CAN make coherent decisions. I also think that he finally has respect for Green (but not much on Blue's feelings toward him, he doubts it but he's given no choice since he sees her happy with him)

Gahd, I love you Silver.

Hoping for a Grass starter sequel, no?

I'd started copying my favourite quotes from this, all the ones that made me laugh out loud, into a Word Document. By the time I'd reached the second page I realised there really wasn't much point, the whole thing is just too funny!

Once again your characterisation is perfect and your portrayal of Blue is just goddamn hilarious. Keep up the good work :D