Wow. Really nice :)) and Hinamori being a matchmaker is definitely an awesome idea XD

HAHA I love every bit of this!

O3O DUDE! All of your fanfictons are flippin awesome! You guys have got to make more fanfictions.
-My lord! Only if that Tite Kubo dude could see this and agree to the pairing. If he doesn't ima have a flippin cero blow some sense into his ._.-

OMG, Momo was perfect in this! Haha, I loved it!

Haha I loved it! So awesome! :D

I like Momo as the interfering older sister much better than as the competition. In canon, I think Hitsugaya was the annoying sibling, but I like this Momo much better than her rather annoying, pathetic canon counter part.

Later,
Rex

Adorable. I love the personality you put into Momo, and you didn't go overboard on any one character. Really good, i love it!

Ah man, when you have the amv posted (if you haven't already) be sure to let me know. I want to see it, lol

aww that was adorable. and i can totally see it happening too, this could be cannon and id so luv it if it was. Momo as Ichigo's second in command was an interesting choice, never would ahve thought of it myself but when i think about it it kinda fits.

very cute story

lol cute ) good luckies with your future stories )

Very well done. :)

I couldn't stop smiling. In fact, I'm still smiling as I'm writing this.

Awesome story!

This made me smile. I can just see Toshiro being that dense and having to have some awareness knocked into him. :) I also like the way you wove protective Ichi-nii into the story.

Really well written, I loved it