I must assume that Hermaione took Draco's hand to leave… True, I liked it but I would have loved it more if you had delved into that ending. I don't know, some kind of epilogue. I was intrigued to find out more.

I feel that this would make a good one act play and can visualize it as such. It is basically action between two people in one room with another two having minor roles and other events happening back stage. The "M" rated stuff would be implied with lights going out and perhaps sound alone. The flashbacks would be up in a screen. The curtain falls with Draco's hand still stretched out, leaving the audience with that image.

What a wonderful one-shot! And that ambiguous ending! *clutches heart*

That was an Awesome one shot. Your writings are just beyond perfection, i really love and admire your writing style and would love to read more works from you.

Regards,
Your Super Fan Nim

The ending is great! Thank you again for all your stories.

this was awesome!

Oh man! And it was so beautiful and then...OW!
I hope she takes his hand. I really do.

Beautiful story.

Still great

I'm of the hope that she took his hand...they survived and won the war.

I enjoyed this one a lot! I like how you placed the flashback at the end, instead of at the beginning. I feel like it made the ending even more ambiguous ... I would hope that Hermione had enough sense to leave with Draco, but if she is as stubborn as he is/was, then it doesn't look good.

You are the queen of beautiful one shots. Seriously these are absolutely amazing one shots.

so lovely

So here I am years later finding this golden nugget of angst & beauty. I cannot love this enough. And the open-ending is genius.

I found this on one of the posts in tumblr. Your Beautifully written one-shot. Brilliant.

Gahhhhhhh I don’t like not knowing if they leave together! I think they do but I don’t know!