Beautiful story.

If Charlie and Rene are cousins then that would be incest for Bella and Edward to marry they would be related yuk.

Wonderful story

why are you so cruel! i cried at the end! but like seriously you are the best fanfic writer ever

such a great story. the end of it sure did sucker punch me in the heart .. very well written

Oh man. Drinking alcohol when pregnant. Those were the days.

Oh what a story! I couldn’t stop reading it! It was sooo wonderful!

I cried

You did say it in the AN but major tissue warning for the last chapter!

loved it :)

I enjoyed reading your story. I did not enjoy reading all the tragedy but I understand all stories can't be all peaches and cream. I could have easily endured all of the bad things except for the unhappy ending. I cant believe you killed off Isabella at thirty five, I don't have words. Besides Edward's devastation Beatrice must of been hurried of her mothers death on the way home from her wedding. I know it's real life and this is more accurate than most stories on here but I'm so disappointed it didn't end happily after all the other tragedies. Thank you so much for sharing.

Thank you for this amazing and wonderfully written story. The saddest part for me though was it was a long 30 years he had to live without her.

Wow! What a wonderful story!
The last part of chapter 28 made me cried like I haven't in so long. Edward dispair at his wife dead is heartbreaking. But I enjoyed this story so much, thank you for sharing ;)

That is so sad, but good. I am glad you breezed through the sad part.

Wonderful story thank you