Perfect..just perfect.

Hello! ...No way I'm revising this signed in.
But wow.
I love how you write those two. In character, completely. Tara's naughtier, but delightfully so: and all of Willow's dialogue felt so much like her, especially the ending.
Loved the way you phrased a lot of it, too. Sensual, but also Whedon-y a lot of the time. ("made her belly feel warm and tingly.") One flaw I'd say is that as soon as the sexual bit started, the paragraph breaks all but vanished: makes it a bit harder to read. Otherwise, lovely.

Awesome! :)

Awesome one shot.

Sexy and sensual. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

This was the second fem slash fic I've ever read. The first femslash fic I stumbled across was a little disappointing, so I wasn't sure what to expect with this one, but it turned out to be better than I described everything so nicely and made Willow & Tara's first experience together sound so sweet and intimate. They seemed so . . . in synch with one another, connected.

Oh my GOD! That was so perfect! It was sexy and a TOTAL turn on! I know that tmi but it's true. This story was just too amazing! 3

Nicely written. :)