Beautifully well-written and haunting, even if Lelouch is much lesser for all these twisted changes. I honestly doubt this Lelouch had even half the ability of his canon-counterpart. Someone he would have been a true Demon Emperor, but lacked the skill required to get him there.

What I find particularly interesting, though, is that this Lelouch fits so well with what Suzaku, Ohgi, and Schneizel always claimed he was: a monster, a demon.

Really well done.

Merecías sufrir más lelouch

I horrifyingly like it, though i really hoped for something more between him and C.C.; though the ending was tragic though.

psycho Lulu is scary

I like it. I like it a lot.

DAMN! That's a lot of FATALITY! (MK reference intended, even though it's not a fighting game) concocted by Lelouch to perform these deaths in an "art form" (which of course Mortal Kombat is well known for, "FINISH HIM!"). While Lelouch didn't murder his victims MK style (it can be argued that some of his kills may count as a 'fatality'), but he seems to enjoy killing people by BREAKING THEM.

My goodness, if your Lelouch has gained the ability to kick ass, I bet you he will THRIVE in a Mortal Kombat tournament when given the chance; he will only join just to sadistically murder the Kombatant who lost to him and have the thrill to bathe in one of the bloodiest "fight club" tournaments ever.

Sharing my thoughts here.

lelouch makes for a better tragic villain than a hero, nice work!

Jajaja que divertido.

This is beautiful and amazing and wonderful 10/10

-_-. Noooooooo! This should be an entire story! I love reading about deception! :D. It was wonderful. I'm a bit sad Suzaku shot him dead though.

This... is so beautifully dark.

The lines: ""You can't die," and there's a trill in my veins at the thought." &
"The Tragedy is so beautiful that I lose my breath all over again."

Tells me that IF Lelouch plans to kill CC to fulfill her wish,he is going to torture her first SLOWLY like a sadist would do. Then he is going to break her like what he did with Mao by mind rapeing since CC's immortal, Lelouch is going to loose himself to his pleasures for a pretty long time...or so you think.

Do you ask yourself that how long would it take for Lelouch to stop!?

By how I understand it, Suzaku already shot him for dead in this Fic...with a twisted smile on Lelouch's sick face

I'am just sharing my thoughts. This FanFic is now a favorite of mine by how dark it is and easy to understand. YamiPaladinofChaos, you wrote a story worthwhile a read & I applaud you for your talent.

I remember why i love darkness. This was beautiful your live-journal warning was well warranted "I know this hurts. It was meant to." it did.

By the way, I'am reading it again cuz I actually like this version of Lelouch who manage to scare the sXXX out of me for what he's done, but in a creepily enjoyable way. And he aint evil for no reason. Hope to find more FF where Lelouch turned to the dark side but with a sympathetic reason to do so

When I first learned about this one-shot, I ignored this at first expecting it to be junk but no, you amaze me that Lelouch can be written in such a way that keeps my interest. Why? Because I want something different and NOT the usual plots written about him (especially the PEGGY SUE ones). He has to kept in- character even from the very beginning; but regarding the AU route, this is where they can make SOME legal changes in order to actually make sense because his and every other canon character are influenced by their surroundings and events around them. Otherwise great story. I look forward to your talented writing cuz even simple sentences can summarize a stories plot