*sniff* *sniff* did she really die? :'( *sniff* *sniff*

This is seriously the greatest story of all time. It's such an unexpected plot full of twists and turns and why the heck are you not famous in the Spitfire world yet!? AMAZING. Please update I'm begging you please

Sand Cursive, this is one of the most beautifully written, most interesting and all around BEST Spitfire fics and fanfictions I've ever read. I will seriously cry if you don't finish this, so I'm BEGGING you. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this. It's amazing- beautiful- heartwarming. If I had to rank my favorite stories, this would be in the top 5 by far. Amazing.

This story＼(o)／ can't wait for next chapter

this is so great! pretty much every chapter breaks my heart. Cant wait for the next chapter!

This was so sad, but really really well done. I really hope Artemis comes back though. I also hope its not an unhappy ending. That would be too sad. Anyway, I can't wait for more. Please update soon.

I think that with is a awsome story and you need to update!

I've just been quietly reading for a while, but I gotta say:

This chapter kinda broke my heart (as usual).

I was seriously stuck between wanting Wally to go with Liza and be happy or to never forget/betray Artemis. It is the sign of a good writer that would actually make me care about the feelings and happiness of an OC and even tempt me to want the main character to be with them. Great job.

Somehow, I have a feeling that this story will only end in tears. However, you can count on me to keep this on the story alerts. :) Again, wonderful job!

I'm missing Artemis in these last two chapters. It was a great chapter as usual though, looking forward to the next one eagerly- Hope to see more Wally/Artemis interactions! :) Great Job!

I like that we are seeing more characters as the chapters go on, I love Zatanna! 10/10

Great Chapter :)

This was definitely by far one of my favorite chapters, the angst, the romance and the interactions between wally and artemis were amazing and so well-written. 10/10

Another amazing chapter :) 10/10

Poor Wally, I feel bad for him throughout this chapter, and all the others. 10/10 Great chapter

Your writing is so moving, it makes me feel as though I am experiencing it first hand. 10/10!