Reviews for Death of Heroism
Logic11B chapter 70 . 11/9/2019
I'm almost certain negative reviews are removed, and given the age of this story, censoring negative feedback should tell you how good this really is.

This trilogy doesn't suffer from bad writing, but horrible story telling... While reading you're constantly thinking that our favorite characters suddenly have autism, or they're Equal Opportunity hires because EVERYONE displays a total lack of common sense. After successfully raping Tali(yes self-insert Michael actually rapes a-bitch) Shepard admits perhaps out of guilt that he's "worried he'll pick geth survival over quarian" and Tali apparently just accepts that as a possible outcome... The extinction of the quarian species being the stakes, and Shepard doesn't seek help for this little problem, while Tali doesn't have the smarts to offer alternatives should the worst come to pass.

This is a classic example of FanFiction 'author knows best', because if the protagonist isn't suffering its either unoriginal or not a true expression of their art.. To everyone else it's just garbage.

Strongly recommend skipping.
Guest chapter 70 . 6/26/2018
Great story! First time reading a really renegade shepard fic, very impressed. I’m reading back through but somehow I missed the Garrus and Tali moment, what chapter was that in?
FrostyChops chapter 70 . 6/25/2018
Once again I am blown away by your mastery of the bittersweet end. This was one hell of a ride and I'm sad to be getting off it. Thank you for the awesome read :D
FrostyChops chapter 66 . 6/25/2018
God this is getting me emotional and pumped. The end comes, I'm almost loathe to see this amazing read end :(
FrostyChops chapter 59 . 6/25/2018
Shitttttt it's wrapping up! The climactic fight draws close! God I'm so excited!
FrostyChops chapter 54 . 6/25/2018
Garrus as Batman is such a hilarious image XD
FrostyChops chapter 33 . 6/24/2018
Senpai, why do you hurt us this way. All I see is pain in the future and I hate that I love it
FrostyChops chapter 26 . 6/20/2018
Oh no... ohhhh no I see whats gonna happen here. Don't do this to me, please let the best out come happen between Quarian and Geth pleeeeeeease. My heart won't be able to take it
FrostyChops chapter 23 . 6/20/2018
Why do you do this to me. Setrus you beautiful monster. I see where that epic grim-dark nature came into play for Chains of Blood haha. I just know that the ending for this won't be happy...
FrostyChops chapter 21 . 6/20/2018
Ooooooooooo shit dude! What are you doing to my precious Shep!
FrostyChops chapter 18 . 6/20/2018
Ahhh yeahhhh Grunt back in the game boi! And he's matured! So awesome~
Guest chapter 70 . 1/28/2018
Extraordinary story ! Loved every second of it
Guest chapter 70 . 4/8/2017
Epic story ! I have loved it. The ending was a little bitersweet but to sum up this is one of the best mass effect fanfictions
Vickmackey007 chapter 43 . 12/11/2016
Probably the best chapter you ever wrote.
Jorgevng chapter 22 . 11/17/2016
I wanted to say..Mordin not man.
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