| Reviews for Everywhere But Your Lips |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/8 You are an awesome writer. I love the way you write Cade, even if it occasionally breaks my heart. |
IrrelevantSoul chapter 1 . 5/3 amazing story! please tell me you're a published author, I would be surprised if you weren't. I love the a/ns at the end, they're so funny :D |
Nono chapter 1 . 3/24/2019 Hey! I’ve been reading all your fanfictions. At first, I was just looking for some romance from victorious. But after reading 2 of your stories I realized I just LOVED the way you write. The words are fitting perfectly the sentences, the moments. Reading your work is amazing, and I spend hours imagining the scenes, and it’s not about the series or the movies or the characters no more but just about the feeling and the shivers your words send. I don’t know how to explain that properly but all I see in these pieces of art is pure talent, no matter what you are writing about. Thank you, Someone that admires you |
Ang29 chapter 1 . 7/23/2018 Right now I'm died, this is so so GOOD I loved it |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2016 Second person is my favourite, actually, and so is this one shot c: |
PurplecatXD chapter 1 . 11/11/2014 Everytime I read one of your stories I forget how poetic you make smut, and every time you remind me. Jesus fucking Christ I love your writing |
Always-4x23 chapter 1 . 10/14/2014 I don't know if you've already made that, but this from Cat's point of view would be awesome as well! I loved it! :) |
Susan chapter 1 . 9/7/2014 Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh OMG It is an amazing and faboluos and cute fic. More cade. |
Dubsteven chapter 1 . 5/16/2014 I love second person! |
Pyrilios chapter 1 . 1/8/2014 Usually. I dislike second person extremely and avoid it at all costs. But this was great! Really, I loved it! Very well done! Ugh such a great little story. Mmmhmmm! |
JADE AND CAT chapter 1 . 10/3/2013 That was intense and left me on the edge of my seat. Awesome! |
Eatsomefood chapter 1 . 8/25/2013 I love this! It says so much, even though it's so short! |
Amiphobic chapter 1 . 7/14/2013 I personally love reading second person, and you never ever disappoint. Another thing I love is your style; beyond just the second person perspective, you bring startling imagery ("...painting every immovable rosette with her lips, one at a time."), and such deep insight to both characters. (And as always, your author notes never fail to make me laugh a little, hopefully this is filling your mouth with gold instead of vacuuming it out.) |
Echokid14 chapter 1 . 5/28/2013 Wow...This was a enthralling story. That leaves me speechless in the wake of its sweet perfection, I loved it and hope to see more stories from you. From what I've read here I feel they will all carry a similar measure of this kind of wonderful palpable thoughtfulness. I just hope you find this review to be the warm soft kiss this deserves and not like any of the latter ones that it felt like being typed out. |
CaribbeanPeasant chapter 1 . 1/12/2013 Dude, this was really cool and innovative. Granted, some of the wording was awkward... I loved it though. Then again, I love a lot of your stories. Congrats on the titles you won and keep writing! |