Reviews for Everywhere But Your Lips
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8
You are an awesome writer. I love the way you write Cade, even if it occasionally breaks my heart.
IrrelevantSoul chapter 1 . 5/3
amazing story! please tell me you're a published author, I would be surprised if you weren't. I love the a/ns at the end, they're so funny :D
Nono chapter 1 . 3/24/2019
Hey!
I’ve been reading all your fanfictions. At first, I was just looking for some romance from victorious. But after reading 2 of your stories I realized I just LOVED the way you write. The words are fitting perfectly the sentences, the moments. Reading your work is amazing, and I spend hours imagining the scenes, and it’s not about the series or the movies or the characters no more but just about the feeling and the shivers your words send.
I don’t know how to explain that properly but all I see in these pieces of art is pure talent, no matter what you are writing about.
Thank you,
Someone that admires you
Ang29 chapter 1 . 7/23/2018
Right now I'm died, this is so so GOOD
I loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2016
Second person is my favourite, actually, and so is this one shot c:
PurplecatXD chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
Everytime I read one of your stories I forget how poetic you make smut, and every time you remind me.

Jesus fucking Christ I love your writing
Always-4x23 chapter 1 . 10/14/2014
I don't know if you've already made that, but this from Cat's point of view would be awesome as well! I loved it! :)
Susan chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh OMG It is an amazing and faboluos and cute fic.

More cade.
Dubsteven chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
I love second person!
Pyrilios chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
Usually. I dislike second person extremely and avoid it at all costs. But this was great! Really, I loved it! Very well done! Ugh such a great little story. Mmmhmmm!
JADE AND CAT chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
That was intense and left me on the edge of my seat. Awesome!
Eatsomefood chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
I love this! It says so much, even though it's so short!
Amiphobic chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
I personally love reading second person, and you never ever disappoint. Another thing I love is your style; beyond just the second person perspective, you bring startling imagery ("...painting every immovable rosette with her lips, one at a time."), and such deep insight to both characters. (And as always, your author notes never fail to make me laugh a little, hopefully this is filling your mouth with gold instead of vacuuming it out.)
Echokid14 chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Wow...This was a enthralling story. That leaves me speechless in the wake of its sweet perfection, I loved it and hope to see more stories from you. From what I've read here I feel they will all carry a similar measure of this kind of wonderful palpable thoughtfulness. I just hope you find this review to be the warm soft kiss this deserves and not like any of the latter ones that it felt like being typed out.
CaribbeanPeasant chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Dude, this was really cool and innovative. Granted, some of the wording was awkward... I loved it though. Then again, I love a lot of your stories. Congrats on the titles you won and keep writing!
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