Please continue on

THIS IS SPARTA! Couldn't resist lol

Hope you update soon! :)

no don't end it here yo you just can't do that don't be so heartless ; ; please continue

You ended on an awesome note! But please keep writing!

I love it, I think there should be an epilogue with Stelios and Alexandria's proper reunion and maybe their marriage.

This is such a cool story! Please write an epilogue xxx

WAITT!PLEASE MAKE AN EPILOGUE! LOVE THIS STORY AMAZING WORK! ITS SO ORIGINAL .. YOU TAKE THE DEFINITION OF AN OC TO ANOTHER LEVEL! BRAVO!

Great story line and concept. I would recommended going back through and correcting any spelling and grammatical errors along with several inconsistencies. But like I said, great concept.

Sorry, I posted this in the wrong chapter. Meant for Ch. 17 not 18. - Correct me if I am wrong but weren't the coliseum and gladiators Roman? I don't think Greece had those

Correct me if I am wrong but weren't the coliseum and gladiators Roman? I don't think Greece had those.

Omg you have to at least write another chapter please this is one of the best stories I've read for this movie please

Loved your take in the story. Not sure if you wrote more after this but you could alway make it a sequel instead of continuing with this story. I think you ended on a very good note and tied everything together.

Great! Not sure on another chapter ...either way works.

I like this story a lot, and I do so love Stelios, but...the historical faults in this...I know its not really important but I'm a Ancient History nerd and...well some things are incorrect. You don't have to fix it, but just so you know for future references.

Spartan women were taught how to fight, and given just about knowledge on the military as men, without the joining the army part. They could were as little as they wanted...the Athenians would be the ones frowning at any women showing ankles. But Spartan's didn't care, they trained naked, both men and women. But that's about it, well done though. I really liked this story :D