I really like this story, I just wish it was longer

You know I always paired them off because of their geniuses, too bad you didn't finish the story up

I'm so so sorry. I really want to like this story, but I just can't bring myself to do it. The way you handled Booth was obviously a cop out to get him out of the way. It was terribly executed and way too rushed. Booth would never abandon any of his children as evidenced by the way he is with Parker. I don't mind ooc stories, in fact a lot of my favorites are ooc to some degree, but that goes against everything Booth is as a character, and more importantly as a man. All in all, it just rubs me the wrong way too much for me to enjoy this.

The first two paragraphs of this chapter are just a repeat of the entire last chapter.

why would goodman (Jeffersonian director) have any authority to place/transfer FBI agents? That authority would fall elsewhere.

If booth wanted to transfer, he'd request it in the Bureau. The Jeffersonian (and goodman) loan the Forensics unit to the FBI.

I have actually been looking for something like this. Carr on.

More more more

Yeah, I want more!

There's too much missing from this story. Sorry, but I have to go.

Yes, this was really short.

I love Booth and Brennen together, but hey, Booth is out of the picture, so let him go. No man is worth the pain he's causing you.

I've never read a story with Brennen and Reid. Should be interesting.

I like it!
keep writing!

sdf

it was good.