Props for that flawless title ;) and the memory now is like the picture was then, when the paper's crumpled up can't be perfect again

noooo u must right on!

Sprinkle covered ice cream cones? Now it's starting to sound good. :D

No but really, I love this story. You write Zim perfectly, confused but still convincing himself that he is THE GREAT INVADOR ZIM THAT DO NOT NEED EMOTIONS. I think it's wonderful. Adding in Dibs and his awesome sister and a lot of wonderful plotwists just makes this story even more awesome.

But that last cliffhanger was NOT NICE. NOT AT ALL. You better continue this soon or I'll... Be sad.

O.e *twich twich* Z-ZIMSS NOT REALLY GONG TO KILL HIM RIGHT?it must be a plan to get them out.!

So I was looking through my email (which I do very infrequently) and see an alert for this story, and my immediate reaction is something like AAH THERE'S A NEW CHAPTER UP MUST READ! And now that I've finished reading it, my reaction is GIVE ME MORE!

Also, can't believe I won! How did TAK of all people come into power? Tell meeeeee...

Song. Hmmm. Okay. I really like the phrase 'face like stone'. Is that an acceptable suggestion? I've never really been fond of drowning in emo-ness.

POST AGAIN SOON!

Love, Invader Jor

*gasps* Why Zim? He loveded u Zim! He loveded uuuuu! Well Im hoping that ur not evil enough to stop this right there ;) please update soon

Me: The sun is shining. I just took my dog for a walk. Day's goin' well so far. Maybe I'll head on over to the Internet for a while. Doo-dee-doo...OHMIGOD! *violently sends laptop into nearest wall due to an unheard of amount of joy and falls into a catatonic state on the floor*

When I finally recovered from my happiness-induced trance, I read this newest chapter. And then threw my laptop at the wall again.

Cliffhanger? WHY DO YOU HATE US READERS SO MUCH? But seriously, great chapter and all, but we NEED ANSWERS. Lol, this was so awesome to read and I really look forward to seeing another chapter!

Sincerely,

a sad, sad Earth-dweller with a hole in her wall and a broken computer

*eyetwitch* WHYYYYY? Did Dib die, or what? *throws pork cow at computer* Why'd you leave us hanging like that? FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-

Dib? DIb? DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIBBBB! NO! YOU EVIL SON OF A BITCHES! DAMN YOU TAK RED AND PURPLE! I WILL KILL YOU ALL! *panting* man that felt good to get off my chest... :)

Any who love the story! Update soon! :D

Omg! I need more! Pwez continue with this! Its AMAZING! And is the mysterious figure tak? Cuz I'm gonna freak it it is! She is so mean to zim and dib! I don't like her...lol.

Omg! I need more! Pwez continue with this! Its AMAZING! And is the mysterious figure tak? Cuz I'm gonna freak it it is! She is so mean to zim and dib! I don't like her...lol.

i love this chapter! i feel so bad for zim and dib though! red and purple r so mean... i like it!

Ok so I'm gonna guess that the unknown fugue is Myuki just a guess cause you stated its a girl and that she's tall so yeah :D poor Zim he's gonna be forced to kill Dib and himself :'(

I guess the mystery figure is Tak :D cuz she speaks with an english accent all the time

who could that "upstart" be? lol idk :P i havent watched the show in a while, u pretty musch covered every irken i know... well, except Tak... anyway i like how u wrote red and purple, seems quite acurate