My biggest issue with this is everything being centered. It's very distracting. Other than that, this was great! I absolutely loved it! :D

this is a wonderful story, and I can't stop laughing because death think is in all caps so it seems LIKE HE IS YELLING REALLY LOUDLY IN HIS HEAD! but still, great job!

Groovy.

That's great! Keep going! I'm especially looking forward to the old, future/past future version of Rory from the Angels take Manhattan.

Will you do a sequel where Death meets the Doctor?

Hahahahahahaha, nicely done. I can imagine Rory would react to Death like that, he's so completely unfazed by everything else in Dr Who, even the TARDIS, a nice chat with Death wouldn't worry him at all.

THE ANGELS TAKE MANHATTEN! PLEASE! This was 'Roryingly' funny!

Such a clever idea. Love the comparison between Rincewind and Rory, and Death stacking the deck :-) The hinted encounter between the Doctor and Death sounds potentially hilarious. But which incarnation...?

*hilarious laughter* poor, poor Rory! And if you would continue from there, I suppose he'd meet Death few more times before the final turn. *snicker* Reminds me of the episode with the dollhouse.
Rory: Great... I died. Again!

Definatley Cool.

...so tumblr sent me here. And I regret nothing. This was hilariously brilliant! Good job :D

This was great! Rory dies way too much, and it's so much fun!

I love you!
Sorry. Thinking out loud. Crazy people...
Thank you for such a great story.

Death only comes for people on the Disc doesn't he?

Very funny