Not such an appealing mate anymore.

I guess he can have any pokemon he wants in his harem, he just has to imagine it. Though, tali knows fire fang and Flare is a fire type so vulpix wont help Heather's team diversity at all. And again, none of them are actually able to breed with a ralts. Maybe a drifloon or a grimer? I hope he evolves into a pretty gardevoir

Its funny because misdrevious is the only one compatible with Link. Tali and Flare are not in his egg group and are therefore unable to mate with him.

I bet Link has the ability cute charm! What a playah, lol. But seeing as how he used to be human this will probably creep him out, unless he was a nasty pokephile or something.

Need MOOOOOAAAAARRRRRR!¡!

Do not dare even consider speculating on the thought of possibly not finishing this story of yours; if ye were to do so, it would be a most terrible decision made by thee..

Great so far. Why is Link losing his human memories: will he eventually tell his lovers of his original state of being, & where is a silver & blue furred unusually attractive female Lucario when you need one?!

Come on man, finish the story.

Whoa. Fond of exclamation points much?

This is definitely a new side to Tali that I was not expecting. I look forward to how this will affect Link and the rest. Great job, keep it up!

Love how the story is going so far. Waiting for the next chapter.

Nice chapter!

Hey, maybe you should get Link to return a bit more affection towards them instead of ignoring them. I think that would improve his interactions with Cinder and the others which I really can't be bothered to remember. Nice chapter! :)

"super epic telekinetic power"? A bit of self-praise from link, but I'll let it slide. Also, you seem to be pissing of link in every chapter. Try to make him happier some more, but other than that, you're doing a great job. Keep it up!

its almost like mine except i have a mudkip as my starter and chaught a sroomish in the woods... it took for ever to get a ralts

Will you be bringing Brendan in? It would be interesting to see the to teams interact if they travel together. Or not. Your decision.

Awesome! Now if you need an OC for Heather's boyfriend PM me fast also 5 stars! Keep it up :-D

Awesome! The gym battle was funny as hell and Link gets more badass each chapter!

That was a twist on my original idea, but it's still pretty good.

Thanks for the shout-out!

Critisism: Try to name the characters without using their actual names. Try "the combusken" instead of Flare or something like that. It gets confusing trying to remeber who is who.

P.S. Did you enjoy my longer-than-normal review? :)