If Chris and his parents never went separate ways and stayed together with both team Star Fox and Star Wolf that would have been better

Hey this is an awesome series you should keep it going.

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I've been lurking on your story for a while. At first, I wasn't all that impressed, but this chapter certainly shows you're improving.

And just in case you get tired of saying "bear," you can also call him an ursine.

Keep on writing

-Brandon

hey i like also MORE!

OMG! update please! Its getting good!

Solrac III It's not a star system either, it's most probably a planetary system.

Lylat isn't a universe. It's a star system. You may want to correct that.
Anyway, it was a good chapter.

Will there be a scene where Chris will have to live among the cornelian citizens? Because I've been dying to read a fanfic where a human has to live a normal life in the lylat system. maybe have him start attending school there or something? He develops a crush on someone? Seriously this sounds cool. update soon!

Well the story seems interesting. I'll kerp my eye on this.

Just a question. How old is Christapher? All you said was a teenage university student. Assuming he's not some type of genius that range is still between 17-19 years old.

Good luck with all of your endeavors.

With so many characters having powers like Marvel heros I'm surprised Fox doesn't have his abilities from Brawl.

Interesting, there's never enough star fox fiction introducing human.

Actually, I'm looking forward to find a fic with a more wrought, more complex first meeting between the lylat inhabitants and the humans, because most of the others fics considered it too lightly in my opinion.

Well, hope you will enjoy typing this fic.